2022年09月大学英语六级写作真题第2套(有点难

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence "Today more and more people begin to realize the pleasures and joys of real-world social interaction." You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
 
首先明确何为真实世界交流:面对面交流

行文思路:

Para 1:
现象引入:虚拟世界交流(网络聊天)不得劲,所以……
抛弃现象,谈本质:未能人类沟通的内在需求
Para 2:
  • 为什么不得劲——面对面交流的好处:
  • 真正的交流是情感的对话
  • 虚拟交流不是什么,缺乏什么,会导致什么后果
  • 面对面交流有能力做到
【补充】
面对面交流反映了不完美的魅力
虚拟交流中某些因素被掩盖;面对面交流则会展现 而这些因素恰是……
Para 3:
为什么我们越来越重视? 名言? + 原因

Possible Version:

Today more and more people begin to realize the pleasures and joys of real-world social interaction. This realization stems from a growing irony in our world: While technology allows us to stay connected across distances, it often reduces communication to superficial exchanges. Endless notifications and virtual messages may simulate connection, but they lack the emotional depth to fulfill our innate need for genuine human interaction. This paradox has led many to rediscover the irreplaceable value of face-to-face communication.
The reason is clear: real-world social interaction fosters genuine warmth and connection, forming bonds that virtual communication cannot replicate. Authentic communication is not merely the exchange of information but an emotional dialogue that transcends words. (Consider a friend offering you comfort during a challenging time—no text, regardless of how well-worded, can replace the reassuring presence of someone sitting beside you.) Digital messages, often devoid of emotional context and tone, feel cold and impersonal, incapable of conveying the complexities of human feelings. Moreover, the absence of physical cues, such as a warm smile or a comforting pat on the back, creates space for misunderstandings and even conflict. In contrast, real-world interactions have the power to diffuse tension with a heartfelt apology or an empathetic embrace, fostering a depth of understanding that strengthens relationships.
Furthermore, face-to-face interactions reveal the charm of imperfection. In the digital realm, individuals often craft flawless versions of themselves, showcasing only their most refined aspects. Real-life connections, on the other hand, expose our flaws, peculiarities, and vulnerabilities—qualities that lie at the heart of authentic relationships. These imperfections make us human, and by embracing them, we form connections that are not only meaningful but also profoundly genuine. The beauty of a stuttered apology, a nervous laugh, or an awkward silence lies in its unfiltered humanity, reminding us that true connections are not built on perfection but on shared experiences and mutual acceptance.
So, why do we value real-world connections more and more today? People will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but they will never forget how you made them feel. Real-world social interaction is what truly touches our hearts, leaving a lasting impression beyond words and actions.
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